Five Minute Freewrite: King Of Fools

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Jane surveyed the environment in less than fifty seconds. She saw her captives a distant far all playing card games with their supposed leader laughing heartily like a King of fools. His boys flanked him with loaded AK-47 assault rifles. Jane knows that she cannot escape immediately, otherwise her name will be sorry. She needs to wait and hatch another plan.

As she was running through her thoughts over her next line of action a touch light was flashed towards her direction from that far distance. They wanted to make sure that she is still there. As soon as the flashlight landed on her face Jane lowered her head in a submissive way. The person was not satisfied, he then flashed the light well round the hideout as if he was looking for something important. As soon as the light went off Jane knew that escaping from there will be pretty difficult.

As soon as they all fell asleep, Jane woke up again and surveyed the environment. She had mysteriously picked up a broken glass and hid it perfectly. It was then time to execute her plans. Tactfully she severed the rope that was clamped on her hands. Then she did same to her legs. She is now free. she needs to act fast too.

Her personal security man was already asleep. Jane tiptoed and walked past him. Within five minutes she was seeing a road, a busy one with vehicles all passing through in high speed. With every strength within here she ran to the main road. Fortunately for her a car stopped, looked at her and then gave her the lift.

And just as they drove away a member of the gang appeared on the roadside holding his gun and foolishly guessing at departed car.

A Five Minute Freewrite: King of Fools

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A great story that captures our attention!
Bravo!

Wow, thanks and am glad you enjoyed it.
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