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RE: The car accident scenario

in The Ink Welllast year

Hello @quan45, Please correct the link to your image. It doesn't lead to the source but simply takes us back to this post. We can't curate until that link is corrected and curation is on a clock, so please correct quickly.

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I have done that, I’m so sorry for that, it won’t happen again. Thank you so much.

Thank you for changing the image. This story holds the reader's interest. You describe the scene in detail and our characterization of your mother is entertaining. Most people dread being in the situation you describe, with another car barreling down on them. The story arc is also good.

Thank you for sharing this experience with us, @quan45