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RE: Outbreak at the Fair

in The Ink Well10 months ago

An intriguing story that explores very topical issues. Some elements of the plot are not fully elucidated, a little more fleshing out of different aspects could improve comprehension.

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Thank you so much for the feedback and support @theinkwell. I will work on those aspect you made mention of in subsequent posts.