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oh, well this is rather wonderful.

I like the character being out of place somewhere which should be familiar; I like the ability to meld back into his surroundaings even though they've changed, but aren't changed enough; I like the double threat of the approaching footsteps and the presence which takes control of him.

I hope to read more

just one small typo shoulder high weeks I'm guessing that should be weeds.

great writing

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Good catch and thank you! I think I found another one when I read back through too.

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