I really liked the temporary solution you gave to your story. It takes place in several time frames and even within the main character's dream. Interesting. The dream is a premonition in itself.
I really liked the temporary solution you gave to your story. It takes place in several time frames and even within the main character's dream. Interesting. The dream is a premonition in itself.
Yes you really got all that I was trying to do in the story
Thank you sweet dreemer