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RE: Never too late.

in The Ink Well2 days ago

The story of @lara-bee is structured around two main themes. On one hand, a young engineering graduate returns to his country to work and finds an old guitar among his personal belongings. From there, he begins a musical journey, the other theme, which doesn't explain how it affects his recognition as an engineer. The plot is dense and rushed. 60% TIW

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Thanks for the review, I will do well to always go into details with other themes when I have more than one in a story.