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RE: Tomorrow's Daughter - Part 4/6

Thoroughly enjoying this series and the version of the future Ursula is living in. It connects with our current state and is totally believable. The way you've sprinkled little details throughout the narrative to give us glimpses of her wider world and it's recent history is compelling and embeds Ursula, Ralf (ick), and the reader deeply into this possible future that we might all have to come to terms with.

I'm glad Ursula made some friends in her search and looking forward to finding out more about her mom.

Really well done!

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thank you

in early writing I was often told my people didn't feel real, so this is very encouraging feedback

& tyvm for the pimp!


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