The Door Upstairs | Fiction.

in The Ink Well3 days ago (edited)

For a very long time Nobody was allowed into the room upstairs..
Not visitors.
Not relatives.
Not even the housekeeper.

Its been twelve years now, the door has remained locked and whenever anyone asked about it, Mrs. Eze would simply smile and change the subject... Eventually people stopped asking.

In fact, most people stopped visiting altogether...
The large house at the end of the street slowly developed a reputation...
Some said the woman living there was strange.
Others said she was lonely.
Most agreed she was hiding something.
Only one person knew the truth.
And that person was Mrs. Eze herself.

The room upstairs had once belonged to her son, David...
Twelve years earlier he had left home after an argument and Neither of them remembered exactly how it started... it's been been long that the details had long faded.
What remained were the final words.
The angry words.
The unnecessary words.
The kind people assume they will have time to take back later.

Three days after leaving home David died in a bus accident and ever since then nothing inside the room had moved. Not his books on the shelves, Not his football trophies that collected dust and even the clothes hanging inside the wardrobe remained untouched because Mrs. Eze treated the room like a museum Or perhaps even a shrine.

Every month she entered alone to clean.
Every month she left in tears.
Then one afternoon, something happened.
A young couple moved into the neighboring house.
With them came their daughter, eight-year-old Deborah.
Deborah possessed two qualities that often cause trouble.
Curiosity.
And fearlessness.

Within weeks she had introduced herself to everyone on the street.
Including Mrs. Eze.
Unlike the adults, Deborah didn't care about neighborhood rumors.
She only cared that the old woman made excellent chin-chin.
Their friendship grew quickly.
Soon Deborah visited almost every afternoon.
One day she noticed the locked door upstairs.
"What's in there?" she asked.
Mrs. Eze froze.
"Nothing."
"But If it's nothing, why is it locked?"...

Children have a talent for making adults uncomfortable... still Mrs. Eze offered no answer.
But the question lingered.
For days.
For weeks.
Until one rainy Saturday afternoon.
The power went out.
Thunder shook the house.
Deborah sat beside Mrs. Eze listening to the rain.
Then she quietly asked,
"Do you miss him?"
The room became still.
"Every day," Mrs. Eze replied...
"Then why do you keep him locked away?"..
The words landed harder than the thunder outside...
Mrs. Eze stared at the child.
For twelve years people had offered advice.
Therapy.
Prayer.
Time.
Yet none of them had asked that simple question.
Why keep him locked away?
That night she barely slept.
The next morning she climbed the stairs.
For a long moment she stood before the door.
Then she unlocked it.
Not to clean.
Not to mourn.
To let go.
Over the following months she donated the clothes.
Gave away the books.
Shared stories she had kept buried for years.
The room slowly transformed into a small reading space for neighborhood children.
The locked museum became a living room again.
And in a strange way, David became more present than he had been in years because he was no longer trapped behind a door and neither was his mother.

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People can leave without giving us a chance to say goodbye, and when that happens, the last memory they leave us clings to us—or rather, we cling with all our might to that last thing they left us while they were alive. But their memory cannot be a burden on our own lives.

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Sometimes all it takes is to let it go.
Keeping the memories around will do no good but keep us in a circle of pain and trauma.
We all know how difficult it is to forget things like this but then life must keep moving so in order to get going one has to let the past go.

Nice and relatable story.. humans often build walls and doors to shield us from the things that hold us back... But once we let go, it feels better

Most times experiences are the workers of those walls.

I enjoyed this story.

An introspective story... The best thing to do is to let go of the significance that can keep traumatizing an individual.

Letting go lightens the heart.

Good one from there; an interesting piece.

I think grief finds it's hold when we put up walls... we often times think it shield us, but in reality its just making the pain stay longer... Nice story