Whoa, this had me hooked from start to finish. Gregory was the type of character you just love to hate, and the tension between you two really carried the story. I kept waiting to see how it would all unfold, and that ending - intense. You wrote the atmosphere and buildup so well, especially at the party. It felt like something was about to go down, and you nailed the suspense.
Glad the narrator made the out alive - barely 😂
Great storytelling