Betty is quite an interesting personality. She got into school with the aim to socialize and meet nice and interesting friends, but along the way, she got engrossed with school work and church activities, that resulted her drifting a little from socializing and all that.

However, when she graduated and did her NYSC, she started socializing again and made a lot of interesting friends.

I feel Betty is a focused lady, she didn't want to deviate from what's more important(education), however, forgetting that one can actually get his or her education and still enjoy social life with friends.

Anyway, I am glad that Betty still achieved her social life after her graduation.

This is a very interesting story, it would have been even more interesting if you included dialogue and narrative, plus character settings, that will help to add more flavor to your story and keep the readers intrigued and involved.

Don't get me wrong my friend, your story is a beautiful read. I got captivated almost immediately.👍

My best regards.😊

My best regards.