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RE: Pic1000 - “Last Breakfast”

in Freewriters2 days ago

She frames her struggle with caffeine feels almost poetic, like she’s holding back a whole cup of sorrow just to savor that jam. That last line about needing strength? Chills. Who wouldn’t want their last meal to feel like a triumph, even if it’s just homemade jam.

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Thanks! Maybe if the story were longer she might have found an exceptional lawyer and that wouldn't have ended up being her last breakfast at all ...🤔👍☮️