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RE: 30 April 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2722 | Prompt: my dead cousin (mi primo muerto)

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Elise sounds like she doesn’t have a good enough relationship with her other cousins like she does with Sandra.

It must have really felt like mockery to her hearing they have to go instead of their deceased parents. Overall, it was a nice short story that was quite relatable to read.

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Elise's arrogance and reluctance to genuflect irritates her family, especially the older generation. At least the dad's cousin didn't omit them due to Elise's attitude. I feel that the elder respected Elise to a point, but not enough to her entirely. And definitely, Elise needs an attitude adjustment moving forward with regards to conflicts.

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I guess she is just paranoid about something.

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