Zapfic50 - “Permission”

in Freewriters15 days ago

When Ingrid decided it was time to marry her boyfriend of three months, she wanted everything to be perfect. The last five losers had dropped the engagement ring and run off screaming. Pathetic. But this one was special. That's why she was bothering to ask his mother's permission to propose.

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Plot twist: none of them were her boyfriends, she's a bossy preschooler and the ring is almost certainly made of candy 😉

Anyhow, if you'd like to write a 50 word Zapfic too, all the details are over here.

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Even though it's brief, I appreciate the beauty of the story. I prefer to focus on the interpretations. They leave room for the imagination. The clarification brings calm but removes that ambiguity. It's like reading several stories at once. Great contribution.

You got a lot out of 50 words! Glad you liked it though 😊