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RE: Hideaway

A very entertaining read about this fantastic world, your narrative immerses readers in that surreal landscape. The ending leaves us wanting to know more about the steps and if the protagonist is caught.

Thanks for sharing your story.
Excellent day.

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Thank you! I tried to focus on the landscape primarily to help set our scene. I do tend to be better at cliffhangers than reasonable endings too haha

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