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RE: When Hell Spills Over

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The mystery continues! Poor Mikel. You handle the blurring lines between Mikel's dreams and reality, and tension effectively. I'm liking the introduction of Amilia. She's an interesting and enigmatic character who seems to 'know' everything there is to know about the orphanage. And that sinister voice! Sounds like a bully!
!PIZZA

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Thank you! 😭

A bully? Or an Eldritch evil being from the depths? Who knows.