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RE: Scholar and Scribe invitational: Second encounter

Moving to another country and changing her name wasn't enough for the crazed stepbrother. Vengeance is a powerful motivator. In this story, Paul was wrong for his previous assaults on her. Him tracking and stalking her tells of his insatiable thirst for revenge. He wouldn't have given up. How he broke into her home was unnerving. It's a good thing Liam was able to rescue her in time.

You weaved an excellent thriller in revealing the contents of the note. Ellen knew immediately the culprit was someone from her past aware of the situation. Only three people...and the stepfather was deceased.

Thanks so much for sharing this thrilling story. Nicely done. I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.

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