What an action-packed story. Your descriptions of each scene placed me on the sideline watching, anticipating Judy's next move. She a fierce and strong-willed undercover agent to have fooled Pat long enough to gather the evidence.

I like how you ended your story and was happy that Judy wasn't severly injured. The intrigue at the end with the package made even me anxious hoping it wasn't retaliation and Pat has learned of her whereabout. He must have been a big-time gangster.

One thing I read that you may want to finish is the final sentence. Seems a few words are missing, I believe:

"He might be behind bars, but only Judy knew just how dangerous the ma"

Thanks for sharing this suspenseful action drama. Take care and have a good rest of your week.

!LADY