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RE: Bajo la sombra del gran árbol / In the shade of the big tree

in Spooky Zone14 days ago

Wow, I really wasn’t expecting that ending… a tree that looked so innocent, where birds used to build their nests in spring, it seemed like part of the neighbourhood, in a good way, as if it were sharing the neighbours’ experiences on their walks. It turned out to be a cursed tree that, when you least expect it, devours people without leaving a trace of them. Perhaps the tree was possessed by some entity from the dark realm. I wonder what it’s like inside, surely the blood of its victims runs down its trunk and through its branches.

A really great story, I love that you’ve used your own photos to tell and illustrate it. You can turn anything into a great story. Thank you so much and a big hug!🤗

Woowww pues no me esperaba ese final... un árbol tan inocente en apariencia y que en primavera las aves hacían sus nidos, parecía parte del barrio, en el buen sentido, como compartiendo las experiencias de los vecinos en sus paseos. Terminó siendo un árbol maldito que cuando uno menos se lo espera devora a la gente sin dejar rastro de ellos. Quizá el árbol estaba poseído por alguna entidad del plano oscuro. Me pregunto como será el interior, correrá la sangre de sus víctimas por el tronco y las ramas, seguramente.

Muy buena historia, me encanta que hayas usado fotos propias para contarla e ilustrarla. De todo se puede hacer una gran historia. Muchas gracias y un gran abrazo!🤗


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