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RE: Two can play.

in The Ink Well11 months ago

You have described in some detail the characteristics of a narcissistic man who experiences love as a manipulation of women who serve his self-concept.
Your story impresses as very well told, @zyzymena, although you overstep a certain limit on what is allowed in the community with your metaphor about the physical characteristics of the protagonist. Abiding by the rules of the community does lead to better rewards. Your psychological approach is accurate and produces interesting work.

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Oh dear! I really need to write the rules in my heart so I won't break any of them.