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RE: Everything She Never Sent.

in The Ink Well3 days ago

Hi @treasuree. Please be sure to read and comment on the stories of at least two other community members to be eligible for curation. Also, we recommend that you take another editing pass through this story. The opening is disjointed and there are many errors, such as dialogue with quotation marks only on one side, and words that are capitalized in the middle of a sentence. The day starts as a Tuesday morning, but by the time she reads the letter it is the afternoon. We know you can do better! The story itself is interesting from a plot perspective. 🙂

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I made my comments, sorry I know I was supposed to but got busy and forgot, I will work on my editing. Thank you for the notification.

Thank you!

Done thanks