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RE: October The Sixteenth

in The Ink Well10 months ago

This story was an enjoyable read that held my interest to the end. Nicely balanced, and original in its conception and delivery. The ending could have been a little stronger, as it felt like Anura took the news that she was going to be separated from her family and friends for at least a year, and spend that time in Hell... a little too easily, but overall, this was a hit for this reader!

Thank you for writing in The Ink Well, @kei2. We always look forward to reading your stories.

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Thank you so much.

I agree about the ending and it is well noted. I think I didn't want the narrative of living in hell to feel like the most terrible thing to happen to a person since people in the story lived there.