This piece is an absolute delight. You’ve done a fabulous job building tension and pacing the development of the relationship. Nice, bantering dialogue rounds out the piece so very nicely. You might consider a career as a romance author, it’s that sweet!
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Wow, this comment is the most beautiful compliment I have received today. I am happy the story made a lot of sense and for me becoming a romance author, I still have a lot of work to do.
Thanks for the comment, it means a lot to me.