This is a very nice story, @chukwukajrr. You introduce interesting characters and allow us to visualize a scene. There are a lot of names, however. This even seems to have been an issue for you, in the story. Although Michael is in the hospital, you have a line where it reads: "but Michael began to eat his own while in the car". Michael can't be in the car, can he, if he is in the hospital?

This is just a small thing, but it shows how hard it might be for a reader to keep track of all the names.

Still, you have a nice knack of adding details that render the story and characters relatable.

Thank you for sharing this story. We hope to read more from you.