You created quite the suspenseful tale, @bipolar95! The plot kept building and the reader can't help but worry that something is going to go wrong. And indeed, Jane's plans simply did not go as planned, no matter how hard she tried. That's interesting that a boss can reduce his worker's pay for making a mistake.

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