Mi participaciòn a " Soloescribe concurso #21 [Esp-Eng]"

in Soloescribe11 days ago (edited)

This is a bilingual publication. At the end of the post you will find the English language version

Esta es mi participaciòn al Soloescribe concurso #21 al cual fui invitada por el amigo @felpach. A mi vez invito a @rayuela2 a escribir un poema inspirado en el post de @lisandrafc.


Observando la noche de oscuridad latente
su sonido es silencio que llena el alma mìa
y me estalla muy dentro ese tu amor ausente
y amenaza ahogarme tanta melancolía.

Busco los rayos idos del sol en el poniente
como hurgo en la vida buscando alegrìa
más solo me rodea la oscuridad creciente
y la existencia trae más penas todavía.

¿Quizà allà a lo lejos tu corazòn aun siente
aquel amor bizarro que tu boca decìa?
¿O serà que ni un poco me amaste realmente
solo lo imaginaba y yo misma me mentìa?

En esta lucha vivo tratando vanamente
de olvidar tu recuerdo, de noche y de dìa
pero solo consigo que reines en mi mente
y asì cada momento te amo màs todavìa.




English version



This is my participation in the Soloescribe contest #21 to which I was invited by my friend @felpach. In turn, I invite @rayuela2 to write a poem inspired by the post by @lisandrafc.



Observing the night of latent darkness
Its sound is silence that fills my soul
and your absent love explodes deep inside me
and so much melancholy threatens to drown me.

I look for the gone rays of the sun in the west
as I search through life looking for joy
but only the growing darkness surrounds me
and existence brings even more sorrow.

Maybe there in the distance your heart still feels
that bizarre love that your mouth said?
Or could it be that you didn't really love me even a little bit?
I just imagined it and I was lying to myself?

In this struggle I live trying in vain
to forget your memory, night and day
but I only get you to reign in my mind
And so every moment I love you even more.








El texto fue creado sin utilizar IA


The text was created without using AI


Foto propia tomada con celular Samsung J2 Prime


Own photo taken with Samsung J2 Prime cell phone


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Disfruté muchísimo la lectura de su lindo poema, en el cual has utilizado recursos estilísticos de extraordinaria fuerza expresiva, como el epíteto "bizarro" para referirte a ese amor intenso. Bendiciones, que tengas un lindo día.