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RE: A Memory of Tomorrow - A villanelle

in Blockchain Poets10 months ago

This is a great still frame of how partying can lock people into loops. You've left the pungent smell of bacon cooked in a time perhaps unremembered lingering with the image of an isolated body part. A spiral which can only be washed away with another shot of whiskey...

I really enjoyed how raw this was!

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