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RE: Fire Goddess Presage | nftshowroom X alienarthive challenge for March: Theme: "Folklore" - No. 3

in Alien Art Hive2 months ago

What a gripping and rich piece. Zorinda is a very admirable and well developed character. She's strong and courageous, despite the barrier of being unheard. She isn't just fighting fate but also fighting dismissal, hierarchy and family dynamics. The dismissal part grates on my nerve. Everyone underestimates her but she's key to their survival. While reading, I felt like screaming at Altheria and Geoffrey to listen to her, if only to save the chancellor's life.

The shift into the supernatural with Lady Katerina is compelling and well done. Especially because we see Zorinda inherited her powers and visions from her. Now I'm very curious who "the puppetmaster behind the betrayal" is.

A beautifully written story, as always. I enjoyed it. Take care and have a great day. 🌹

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The puppetmaster is Geoffrey who touched her when he shook her shoulders in anger. I feel that he felt exposed, and feared her letter mentioned him, so he destroyed it on the way back to the Chancellor. Children are to be seen and not heard, but she would have her day. Five wives and fifteen children is a bit much that a lot goes unnoticed.

Since this is a prophesy piece, I wanted to ensure that she inherited her powers in which she was partially unaware, except the disturbing dreams that her mother shared. I appreciate your visit and insight into my characters. Thanks so much for your visit and as always, your support.