28 May, 2025 @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2750 | Prompt: a stray bullet (una bala perdida)

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MicroFiction: A 250 word story format that I often utilize to address the daily prompts. The story today is written using the word prompt "a stray bullet".

....Crime is rampant in some areas; more than others due to a number of factors. People targeted, together with innocent bystanders are affected. Families torn apart. The criminals have little regard for human life as they pillage and plunder through life taking what is not theirs and harming those in their paths. It's a vicious cycle that appears to be never ending. I share a micro story along those lines.

For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of 28 May 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2750: a stray bullet.

Below is my story:

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Gray and unassuming, the utility vehicle begged for space near the curb where Mark Goodwin deposited the trash receptacle inches from the driveway. In a rush, he overlooked the passenger sitting in the back seat who'd canvassed his home.

Inside, Mark settled down to entertain his guests. Outside, noise rose from neighborhood children, including his talented son, Hayward, engaged in a game of basketball.

Within moments, shots rang out, followed by chaos, throughout the street.

The weapon that left Hayward unable to pursue his dream of a college athlete was definitely a stray bullet. At least that was the consensus circulating in the neighborhood after a reporter spoke to a witness that Saturday afternoon who'd stood opposite the house behind a barricade. Corroborating onlookers to the witness' account matched neither the time nor the details the witness provided.

Immediately after the terrifying incident that left one of Mark's friend dead and Hayward injured, a get-together was held two houses down. Alphonse studied the group known for spreading conspiracies. He cocked his head down and listened intently, weaving through the crowd for the perpetrator's description.

Luck favored him that day. Nothing to connect him, he eased away from the site, a sneer crossing his lips.

Later, Alphonso jumped to his feet. His chest rose and fell with rapid breaths as the police bombarded his apartment.

Unbeknown, the Goodwin's security camera caught the tail end of his accomplice's license plate as he backed into the driveway before speeding away from the crime.

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Microficción: Relato de 250 palabras escrito a partir de la palabra "una bala perdida".

...La delincuencia prolifera en algunas zonas, más que en otras, debido a una serie de factores. Afecta tanto a las personas atacadas como a transeúntes inocentes. Familias destrozadas. Los delincuentes tienen poca consideración por la vida humana mientras saquean y rapiñan por la vida llevándose lo que no es suyo y perjudicando a quienes encuentran a su paso. Es un círculo vicioso que parece no tener fin. Comparto una microhistoria en este sentido.

Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de 28 May 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2750: a stray bullet.

A continuación mi historia.

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Un sospechoso entre ellos

Gris y discreto, el utilitario mendigaba espacio cerca del bordillo donde Mark Goodwin depositaba el contenedor de basura a escasos centímetros de la entrada de su casa. Con las prisas, pasó por alto al pasajero sentado en el asiento trasero que había sondeado su casa.

Dentro, Mark se acomodó para entretener a sus invitados. En el exterior, se oyó el ruido de los niños del vecindario, entre ellos su hijo Hayward, que jugaba al baloncesto.

En unos instantes, sonaron disparos, seguidos de caos, por toda la calle.

El arma que dejó a Hayward sin poder perseguir su sueño de atleta universitario fue sin duda una bala perdida. Al menos ése era el consenso que circulaba por el vecindario después de que un reportero hablara con un testigo aquel sábado por la tarde que había permanecido frente a la casa detrás de una barricada. Los testigos que corroboraron el relato del testigo no coincidían ni con la hora ni con los detalles que éste proporcionó.

Inmediatamente después del aterrador incidente que dejó a un amigo de Mark muerto y a Hayward herido, se celebró una reunión dos casas más abajo. Alphonse estudió al grupo conocido por difundir conspiraciones. Agachó la cabeza y escuchó atentamente, entretejiéndose entre la multitud en busca de la descripción del autor.

La suerte le favorecía aquel día. Al no encontrar nada que le conectara, se alejó del lugar, con una mueca de desprecio cruzándole los labios.

Más tarde, Alfonso se puso en pie de un salto. Su pecho subía y bajaba con respiraciones rápidas mientras la policía bombardeaba su apartamento.

Sin saberlo, la cámara de seguridad del Goodwin captó el final de la matrícula de su cómplice mientras retrocedía hacia la entrada antes de huir a toda velocidad del crimen.

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La captura de pantalla en WORDCOUNTER.net evidencia mi uso de exactamente 250 palabras para crear mi ZapFic250.

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As you said, the vicious circle never ends. Even sadly, the law can be bought and the money owners and officials only continue to exploit what the common people have.
Stray bullets often occur, and the common people are punished to be used as substitutes for the 'big' people
great reflection from your short story

Yes, a cycle of violence in which perpetrators don't care about their fellow citizens. It's scary sometimes to the point where as senior citizens we have to be careful when we go out. You can be seriously injured or die for no reason than being in the wrong place at the wrong time where trouble occurs.

Thanks so much for your visit and indepth thoughts on the problem of crime. I appreciate it. Take care and have a nice rest of your week.

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A very painful and touching story, you excelled in portraying the pain and shock caused by a stray bullet in a senseless moment.

You are correct @elias22 in that crime is senseless. Those who carry it out have little regard for their fellow human beings. In my city, we've experienced numerous road rage incidents that resulted in fatalities. Senseless, especially when the situations mostly involved someone cutting in front of another without a signal light or a gesture as though the road belongs to one person. It's scary to venture out sometimes.

Thanks so much for your visit. I appreciate it and your thoughtful input. Take care and have a good Sunday.

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The effects of crimes cannot be over emphasized. I know families turned sort because of this and those that have lost loved ones. It’s so pathetic

It's devastating to a family of the perpetrator when tragedy strikes due to the hands of a loved one. People often forget the pain they endure because more focus is on the victims. Family and friends may admonish themselves for not seeing, understanding, and intervening. But even with those steps, they may not prevent a situation from occurring.

Thanks for stopping by and viewing my story. I appreciate your support that you took time to visit. Take care and have a good rest of your week.

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Como dice el dicho: "El crimen no paga"

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It certainly doesn't @neblomax. Although many criminals get away with crimes committed years ago that go unsolved. In the end, I believe they will get their just due.

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